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poems i write
don't give me that look
don't give me that look,
don't you see what you took ?
why let this be,
don't you see what it does to me ?
you stole my soul,
my heart is so doul.
every time your with her i wanna cry,
every time i see her i wanna die...
i'm so jelous of her,
i feel so cold,
like i was just sold.
my heart is alone,
my soul in pain,
how was i ever saine...
every time you touch her i wanna run,
you look like your haveing fun.
i miss the way you touch my skin,
i miss your kiss it was so warm.
don'tgive me that look,
don't you see what you took ?
i watch my blood flow,
how can my heart ever sew ?
you turned your back,
you through me in a sack...
i'm not a toy,
why act like a boy ?
your sopose to be like other men,
not act ten.
don't give me that look,
don't you see what you took ?
by- me of course


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  • User Comments: [9]
    <center>Thats really pretty, yet really sad....your really good at writing poetry....have you ever won anything?

    comment Lololdaccount · Community Member · Tue Apr 12, 2005 @ 05:36am
    you should kick both of those guy's a**

    comment FarFromjpn13 · Community Member · Tue Apr 12, 2005 @ 06:28am
    thanxs guys and no i've never won anything cause i only sent one of then in for the first time a month ago...and i would kick there asses but i bigger then that whee heart

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Tue Apr 12, 2005 @ 03:33pm
    sad beautiful and so meaningful though i should state that i never would make you feel like that because i love you to much for me to lower my self to that and id rather die before i did that to any one 3nodding

    comment Blood_Black_Thorn_Rose · Community Member · Wed Apr 13, 2005 @ 05:48am
    ya i know and same to you

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Wed Apr 13, 2005 @ 03:19pm
    wow thats whats goin on with me right now

    comment Kar Kar-chan · Community Member · Thu Apr 14, 2005 @ 03:39am
    i know

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Thu Apr 14, 2005 @ 03:52am
    its very good. 3nodding you got a talent for writing poetry.

    comment Whisper My Rejection · Community Member · Sat Apr 16, 2005 @ 01:49am
    thank you strange person i don't know

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sat Apr 16, 2005 @ 02:41am
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