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No lanturn to lead the way
Only the cold cruel wind at my back
There is no light of day
Only the dark of black
No dawn to dawn to gaze upon
In the dark light i see only what I lack
Light
Trust
Sight
The will to fight
A reason to go back
In this dank cold place there are no smiles that warm the day
No music filling the silence only cruel smirks that leave the night silent and black
I bend my head and pray
Beady eyes appear and make feel unright
They follow waiting for me to fall...
To temptation
The wings of night swoop down to claim what they believe is theirs
An eagle crys out in redemption
The inky black surrounds me
It coils up my body
Restraining me
Nobody can help me nobody
It is my cage
It is my dispair
It is my rage
There is no one who will hear
It is my darknes, my cage
My cage of darkness
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Title:
Caged in Darkness
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Artist:
Sakura Haruno cutiecat
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Description:
Edit:PLEASE COMMENT AS WELL AS VOTE!!!!
It doesn't help me get any better if people just vote. I need feedback to improve so PLEASE comment. I don't mind getting low scores I would however like to see the thinking behind the score. I would love to be able to improve my poetry! Thank you in advance! <3
~Thanks So Much Sakura ~
This poem won me a free e-book. So I might share it so i could get so more feed back on it.
Hope you enjoy!!!
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Date:
03/31/2012
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Tags:
caged
darkness
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