Which Path Now (Poem)

• Artist: Haxiberry
• Description: This is a poem I wrote when I was young ._. It's also my first poem. Please no negative comment :<
• Date: 03/27/2011
• Tags: path poem destiny game desire

A thousand flowers bloomed up in the sky
yet I am left here to die
The sorrow winds that never returned
carried me to the lands which burned

A single step in faiths desire
left me standing in a ring of fire
the heaven sang in front of me
but is this my destiny ?

War and suffering spread once more
made the heavens sing no more

Once again I chose my path
to the left is the world which was labeled bad
while to the right I could see no ones sad

Would I choose the world which I once felt pain
or will I enter the kingdom where freedom is the next game

Comments

[Aedicule]

I like it is good

[Yousei Youmori]

I Like it its really deep and makes you ponder. ^_^

[Leona Valor]

The poem is very nice smile
At first I thought it was just random but then I got the point n.n It's very decisive. Very nice ++

[Arrea Delano]

I love this poem. It seems like there's a struggle between personal desire and fate.