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why does life put me at its mercy
why am i seen as the forsakin one
just tell me why
tell me why
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- by chaos the EMO |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/16/2010 |
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- Title: why
- Artist: chaos the EMO
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- Date: 10/16/2010
- Tags: life
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Delightful_Indigo - 12/07/2010
- I should be it and I should be before mean
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- Delightful_Indigo - 12/07/2010
- Umm.. How do I say this. I lacks a lot more then just effort. U need to add more detail. Unless u can do fiction highlight and write a story that makes the reader feel greatly in 25 words or less. U should pratice doing that if you are going to write that much for a poem okay. I mean poems can be short but at least have detail or make the reader understand in a way better then this. And yes you have to spell right it's really important.Try more. No offense takin' right. Just tryin to help.
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- jimvansage - 11/18/2010
- Your lack of effort...can't even spell forsaken right
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