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My eyes laid claim to it before i did,
from that distance,
i saw that this wasn't ordinary beauty,
the instrument was delicately made,
magnificent,
even without playing it,
i knew it was amazing,
there was an aurora around it,
i hadn't noticed before,
i picked up the instrument,
as delicate as i can be,
pluck the strings,
the violin made a sound,
so beautiful,
i couldn't resist but to smile at it's tune,
the sound was rich,
like a delicious laughter,
this instrument fit in my arms easily,
as if it was made to be there,
that's when i knew,
this instrument was destined to be mine,
but,
i knew it would want everyone to know its sound,
it's grace,
and sense of pattern.
- by MelroseHime3316 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/13/2010 |
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- Title: Delicious
- Artist: MelroseHime3316
- Description: just a poem i made at the splurge of the moment, hope u enjoy
- Date: 04/13/2010
- Tags: rasin
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Comments (2 Comments)
- RG_tm - 04/18/2010
- I love this, especially the way you mix the short expressions ("magnificent" / "so beautiful" wink and the longer sentences to make it like what you're thinking. The only thing I thought was a little odd was that there's no ending to it! It doesn't seem finished, like there's more for you to say, i don't know; then again, maybe I'm wrong, I'm not exactly a poet razz
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