My Love Forever

• Artist: sumabear
• Description: This is a short peom that I write for my boyfriend for a while back...
  
• Date: 03/28/2010
• Tags: love

I lay down upon my bed
as I gazed at my love.

I gazed in his green and yellow eyes
as I felt butterflies in my stomach.

I brushed my hand though his red hair,
as his hair felt like silk.

Everytime he touch me,
I felt as I will be with my Love forever.

Comments

[Poetess Kaylee]

Little short, 4 stanzas per 2 lines, total that is only 8 lines. However, I can imagine the emotions running through you so it's fine. 4/5.