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When the day is dawn, I think of you.
When the night is now morn, I think of you.
When a water drop turns into a stream, I think of you.
When our love is heard nor seen, I think of you.
When life is dead, I think of you.
When a word is said, I think of you.
But I will leave you in peace to be
In heaven not alone free
- Title: Free
- Artist: X_Mimie_X
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Description:
don't be scared be free
- Date: 11/25/2009
- Tags: free
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Lillian Lily Flower - 11/30/2009
- That was pretty good. Great job! I have to agree with the other person, the lines are kind of fuzzy. But it is very good.
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- amhgirl1234 - 11/27/2009
- It is a pretty good poem but the last to lines are kinda fuzzy, but I get the message
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