Free Verse: F**k It!

• Artist: Xx_Raging_Sorrow_xX
• Description: I was mad when i wrote this, letting my feelings run wild, so i wrote this poem.
  I hope u could feel how i felt when i was writing this.
  NO RHYMES, free verse all the way
• Date: 10/31/2009
• Tags: free verse hatred sorrow anger

F** k It by Phong Nguyen

Just because I’m different, you separate me from everyone else.
Not knowing that we are the same.
Thinking you’re better than me.
The way you treat me, is not the way you want to be treated,

So SHUT THE F** K UP!

Just because I’m your son you think you can treat me however you want.
Your wrong, I don’t care who you are.
I will live in my own rules, own life.
This is my life,
No one shall interfere; none shall enter my life.

STAY OUT OF MY LIFE!

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Comments

[Zekoyah]

Well. the curse words are unnecessary. The poem is expressed with very monotone and cliche words and phrasing. And it sounds more like song lyrics to me, even free verse has it's structure.