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Last Breath.
Wind howling in ears.
Something in the mind.
Telling, Talking, and Begging.
What is that?
Sirens?
Cannot be.
Pushing off.
Feet not touching anything.
Memories fly past.
Iciness hit like a swarm of Knives.
Thrashing about.
Sirens above and around grow deafening.
The Body go limp
The world fade away into nothing.
Is this Heaven or is this Hell?
Looking from the shore
A cold soul.
Soaking in the blood of hurt.
The officials nod their heads as they saw who it was.
News reports of the local town blare away.
No peace yet.
Death didn't solve anything.
Sadness is overwhelming.
Trying to speak.
Nothing came out.
Trying to touch.
The hand went though.
No one could hear the cries.
A child speaks.
Dear sir why must you cry?

Comments (3 Comments)
- Maiko_Chan12 - 11/07/2009
- Nice format, but...what was it about, in a nutshell?
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- Xxgodess_of_thunderxX - 10/24/2009
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also some spelling
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- Xxgodess_of_thunderxX - 10/24/2009
- its a great poem. quite a few grammatical errors though. kind of distracting from the words smile overall i give it a 4/5 im not one to talk about grammar but just a heads up!
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