Ode To A Heartbreaker

• Artist: BellaXEdward_forever
• Description: I had to write an Ode for class, so here it is! I know it's not traditional - my point was to mock the traditional Ode.
• Date: 10/16/2009
• Tags: heartbreaker

I love the way
you look at me;
your eyes they
hold a smile.

I love the way
you're holding me;
we've been
like this awhile.

I love it when
you talk with me;
we talk all
through the day.

I love it when
you look at me,
you look at me
and say:

"I don't know
if this is right,
it might not
last forever.

For you might
tomorrow bring
a better,
truer lover."

The way
I gaze into your eyes,
my own all
filled with tears,

I cry:
"But we've
been together
through so many years."

As you hug me
one last time
my heart does
break in two,

you walk
away and
I'm left crying-
something you won't do.

Every moment
after that
my heart's
a bloody lump,

I love the way
how every day
I'm reminded
I've been
DUMPED.

Comments

[LucreciaTatsumoto]

im not really srue if ive been dumped yet but... can u read mine? instead of being a dumpee its a poem about hurting the guy i care about sad its called sorry for the pain

[ABBYdied]

wow.
the last line is WOW.
<3

[goodcharlotte007]

hello, i'm goodcharlotte007. and u should really look up my poem, i think u would like it. Ur poem had good taste the AB method eh? IT was for class, but i could really make it out in the real world with a poetic mind like urs, PM me soemtime, and i'm not a stocker trust me, i hate them. so good job!

[goodcharlotte007]

Hey my name is cody, my cuzin loves poetry, why don't u meet him, he ain't a heart breaker. he'd love to talk with u. and by the way it was terrific, look up the peom 'Villian' it by him ok? good job!

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw smile I love it! The last 2 stanzas are my fave smile Really cool the way it's set out smile The writing in the middle of the "one last time" line, reminds me of a grave stone....

Anyway, 5/5 smile Read mines please? smile