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You try to stop me as I head for the door but I just don't care any more. I fell in love that was my first mistake now this pain is mine to take. When I 'd say I loved you you didn't care you just sat there with a cold stare. The sad thing is that now you care but I've already decided to get out of here. Your tears have fell in front of me you have even begged me from your knees. I left anyways because I don't care I left the dragon to its lair.
You tore my heart out and threw it in the dirt, now all I feel is hurt. the pain you made me feel inside made me feel like I couldn't survive, and every shoot down was a slap in the face making me feel like a big disgrace. I'll probably never find love but I don't care who ever said that life was fair.
- by the arcane angel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/06/2009 |
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- Title: I Don't care
- Artist: the arcane angel
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- Date: 08/06/2009
- Tags: dont care
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- Deadlylight6 - 07/07/2010
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1) sick off ppl writing in paragrahs, poems are in lined stanzas. not that hard to do ppl.
2) PUNTUATION!! yes i see a few periods, but that just pauses wat is being said for a short time. then its back to reading like im on crack. periods, commas, semi collins and such help pace things. learn them - Report As Spam