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I remember Youth
Pudgy faces in solemn frowns
Kneeling, all in a row like toadstools
Casting prayers to harsh angels
Whispering to silent saints
Reverent, brilliant light
Pooling sacred and stained
On the pale altar
Chanting, preaching, Incense wafted
Thick, sweet, choking, exotic
They told us, in grave tones
That the tendrils of smoke carried
Our words to the Creator
Now
In the age of disillusionment
I light incense
Bright flare of flame
Soft, somulent hush
Of sandalwood and patchouli
And I send my hopes, fervent, desperate
Along the unraveling staircase
Of shadows, winding, twisting, flowing, drifting
The dark wisps rise,
To where the birds dance and flit
Like winged gems
And I hope against sense
That someone is listening
- by Intrepid Indigo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2009 |
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- Title: Incense
- Artist: Intrepid Indigo
- Description: Hi folk. Hope you enjoy this poem. Yes it is religous, No I don't make a habit of writing about religion. Have fun reading, please let me know if you liked or disliked or whatever and why. If you liked it then I do have a few more poems on here and will add more later.
- Date: 07/25/2009
- Tags: incense laurenhughes religion doubt poetry
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Thayet of Conte - 07/31/2009
- Yeah, where did the religion bit come from? Per usual, I thought it was awesome, but that's to be expected...
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