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I lay there awake with nobody to call.
With my hand ovr the bed, I let the phone fall.
I can't get to sleep.
My friends are not awake.
Am I alive?
I feel like I'm dead.
And I look like a vampyre the sun had just slew.
I check my pulse.
Heart beating so faintly.
I stare at the roof.
Bored out of my mind.
I light one candle I hide in my closet and stare until dawn.
The light is flickering and keeps burning on.
I am like that candle, at once I decide,
I flicker and dim but will not die.
The sun rises up.
I breathe but once more.
My head hits the pillow.
I'm tired no more.
Then the candle went out.
- by Inu Hanami |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2009 |
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- Title: The candle.
- Artist: Inu Hanami
- Description: A story of a spirit's story of how she could not sleep and her thoughts in that time when the candle was lit.
- Date: 07/20/2009
- Tags: candle depression insumnia life death
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