Stupid?

• Artist: MetallicAlchemist
• Description: I wrote this song cuz, i know how it feels to be lierally stupid. When everybody puts you down when you need to be cheered up. This is like the wake up call.
• Date: 06/29/2009
• Tags: stupid game over life

Tone: Nu Metal

Suckas eat dirt
You come home from work
gettin' sick and tired
from all these news alerts

now why am i thinking
life's just a game
when i should be thinking
life's just a shame

game over
throw your life over your shoulder
there ain't a restart button
cause your soul is in a coma

now why you thinkin 'bout that
are you stupid (4x)

and now you know the basics
to the pain and the suffering
gettin' sick of this hearse
look now your suffocating

you start to scream and shout
times runnin' out
the children got the guns
and a fire starts out

now your burnin up
sickened by the wicked
this is a plague
and the gasoline flickers!

now why you thinkin 'bout that
are you stupid (4x)

Comments

[dEviL_vEnGeAnCe]

it's cool....I like that song you made...
anyway ,, thanks for being my fans ! ^^

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

btw, some of the lines arent exactly matched up syllable-wize. Though, if it's nu-metal, you're probably slurring some of the lines. but it's something you may want to watch out for. Personally, I have a few different genres that I play so I tend to try to avoid slurring whenever possible.anyway, 4/5

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

hmm... It isnt bad... You have some good rhymes in there. A good message too. I like seeing good music with a positive feel. I'm a musician too. A vocalist and a lyricist. check out my stuuf sometime. most of it's on here. be sure to comment