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Oh my stupid crazy life
Starts with my dad and his wife
The wife does nothing wrong
She really loved me all along
My dad threatens to beat and abuse
It's not something I would use
If he ever repeated what he said
I would get a huge punch in the head
Next is the craziest thing of all
It all happened in the school hall
I was on my way to english oh joy stare
Then I was stopped by a certain boy
Wondering what that was all about
He had the courage to ask me out
That certainly brought me a rush
Problem is that I have another crush
Crazy enough they have the same first name
For a moment I thought this was all a game confused
Last but not least is the worst problem I see
Wondering why this is happening to me
I wish I could run away from it all
All that I will leave is a phone call
My friends all love me dearly
But I won't come back until I can think clearly cry
- by i_heart_haters23 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/17/2009 |
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- Title: My Stupid Crazy Life
- Artist: i_heart_haters23
- Description: People have a lot of problems in their life and they wish to aviod them the best they can.....This poem states my personal problems one by one.....Sorry if I don't rhyme constanly.....This is a true poem
- Date: 06/17/2009
- Tags: stupid crazy life abuse crushes
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Strawberry Dewdrop - 06/21/2009
- Emoticons in any serious writing = NO. It's unprofessional. Simple as that. However, you do seem to have some experiences that most people don't in their lives (if they're lucky), so I would inject a lot more imagery in your writing and keep working on it. The golden rule of writing: "show, don't tell".
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- L30NlTU5 - 06/19/2009
- It does rhyme, but it doesn't have to rhyme to be a good poem.
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- DJNOISE5 - 06/18/2009
- wow. i like the faces in the peom. gose right with it.
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