Where I belong

• Artist: Konoka Uchiha
• Description: This is a really bad song I made a while ago about a girl trying to find someone who won't hurt her after a bad break-up. Umm try to give me some advice I know that it's kinda confusing but please just bear with me here. I you like it your awesome. If you don't do something about and help *bleepit*!! TeeHee
• Date: 06/12/2009
• Tags: song love where

Why did you tell me goodbye
Did you sant to see me cry
Fall down on the cold floor alone
Just pleading for you to come home
Boy I'm not buyin'

You didn't care
You never did
You thought I wouldn't be able to bare
Not having our feelings to share
But I'm gone

This is it
This is my moment of freedom from you
I've gotta catch that boy before he is gone
It's not right it's not wrong
That boy is where I belong
He's where I belong. . .
Where I belong. . .

Comments

[Softball Gurlz]

i agree with Chrome_Night. just keep @ it gurl + it'll b great.

[Chrome_Night]

It's got a great advantage over some of what's here, it's got a really powerful emotion as back bone. Use that emotion if you can, feel it, BE it, then try and rework some of the wording that didn't seem to come out right. This one is mine and I've revized it a few times. http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101449233#title#title