Guilt

• Artist: 00Genious
• Description: Here's a short and bad poem by a mental killer (at least, that's the only way I can interpret it). It took me five minutes, so if it doesn't make sense to you, I apologize. The rhythm deteriorates at the end.
• Date: 06/10/2009
• Tags: guilt crazy strange death kill

I have lost all that I had,
All that I ever will.
I knew not that I’d been bad,
I did not mean to kill.
Am I doomed to live my life,
To live it with this guilt?
Here there is a silver knife,
To end the life I built?
I wonder what will happen,
What will they do to me?
Here is what I wish to know:
After death, what there will be.

Comments

[BoggleBoy]

That's a little confusing, butf you think about it for a little bit, it's completely understandable... 5 stars!

[SweetSourLady]

i agree with the other comments if i could i'd give it a 4.5/ 5 - but for now 4/5 it is. ^^

[vv7722]

Some of it doesn't really fit... but it's really good. 4/5

[mangafreak_do or die]

I liked it... That last line sounded off a bit though... still like it! 4/5

[cress35]

it was ok but could use some improvement