One again

• Artist: xItsKris
• Description: This was just a little song i wrote, thought it might make a nice poem.
• Date: 06/08/2009
• Tags: again

I knew i fell in love when i started smiling at strangers and enemies for no reason.
It was somewhere between all our laughs and phonecalls, that i fell in love with my best friend.
He might not be the perfect guy. Not a Shrek, or prince charming.
I will always regret the day i spoke, and said what our friendship really ment. So now, we'll never be the happy part of romeo and juliet. But don't shed a tear, because my day will come.
I'll have that 'one' out there somwhere. Plus, it doesnt matter, because we'll never get the chance to be over, since we never even started.
You still mean alot to me, but its time i have my cinderella story and live like i am in a dream land. No need for applause and no encors.
Because as i write this i have no flaws.
Since, I knew i fell in love when i started smiling at stranger and enemies for neason, once again.

Comments

[XDG Reaper]

Just another quick note. I give this 5/5. Good Job.

[XDG Reaper]

In my opinion as a lyricist, I just have to say your song is pretty decent. if you split up the words into verses and add a chorus or two it could be phenominal. But that's not the only way to make it better, that's just one option. Another is to just extend it, not all songs have a chorus, I mean, you can write a story and make into a song if you want, but the only way for it to really be good, is for it to actually mean something to you truely. If it's personal and true its perfect.