Into The Abyss

• Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
• Description:
• Date: 05/27/2009
• Tags: into abyss

Spawning pool of radiance
Dormant lies Aegean Sea
Caricature the pauper
Ridiculed gauze stain
For those who fight

Rag doll mirror skin
Clutching invisible straws
Visible demons burning
Paws and hands alike
Take care to not become

The brother and the killer
Painter and the mother
Reversed ancestry a
Tainted twist calligraphy
The monster you face

Engulf the sun in ice
And burn the moon, alive
Scream, says Moscow
Scream, says White House
Gaze long into the abyss

Assumed rigid sparkling
Wracked shelter permeating
Loathsome breaded beast
That heartfelt sister smiles
As the abyss gazes into you

Comments

[Ellectric Eccentric]

Not terrible. Seems you fancy more optical conceptual poetics than actual substance (although said work isn't bereft of substance). For a post, this is oddly focused and strong within the realms of imagery. It does delve slightly into adage, or colloquial cliche, but never in a meandering or uninteresting manner. Quite the solid writing, companion. I shall be perusing your other works,and commenting like such.