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slient does my breathing become
still does my heart grow
gone is the vision of the world
in my mind time does slow
Down the scoop
the retical in the center so red
all of my concentration
to this one lone shot has my conscience bled
carcassing the trigger
like the soft cheek of a lover
the moment of the kill
in the air it does hover
The traget is unaware
his defense down
soon his life blood
will he wear as his crown
And the target turns
and the shot is off
the rifle flies from my hands
in the air does it hang aloft
I'm down the stairs
faster than nimble fox
for this building I shant wish
to thus become my funeral box
And as I emerge
from the building lone
all the world it seems
has finally to a silent somber tone
Yet still I run
yet still I flee
from the image of the target
of the face of the dead man to be
It was a contract
one like any other
turned down the money I wouldn't
i would not give it to another
And yet
as I flee to the safety of unknown shores
the memory of the deader
in my mind I still bore
for how would you feel?
Would you be any different than I?
Had you also had to sentence that man,
.....that man with Mine same face to die?
And as i run
fleeing the place of the kill
as the man with my face bleeds and dies
A small part of my heart grows still
- by Richard_theholderoftruth |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/02/2009 |
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- Title: sucidial assasination
- Artist: Richard_theholderoftruth
- Description: I meant this one this time around to have both a phyiscal meaning and yet a metaphorical one as well. Though again it falls to the reader to decide really.
- Date: 05/02/2009
- Tags: sucidial assasination
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Comments (2 Comments)
- DeCrazySheep - 05/09/2009
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First Person Present tense is hard to do.
I'm wondering, have you ever sniped anything before? Don't get me wrong the imagery is very nice, and the introspective part is interesting
but my jaded head can't get aroung how much the guy seems to be thinking. Tends to messe people up.
But, hey it's poetic, we need more poetic hitmen thinks I.
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- gjsoglo - 05/03/2009
- Deep... keep writing!
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