without you

• Artist: chief musician
• Description: just read and leave a comment
  
  tnx
• Date: 04/10/2009
• Tags: withoutyou

I loved you like no one else
and you replaced me for someone else
calling me a liar to what i said
its just, hurting my head

My loyalty to you was so true
i would never replace you
but you have let me down
now that promise is broke down

without you
i would never make it through
but still i love you
nothing could ever replace you

in my heart
there will you be
but now its messed up
where would you find me

Comments

[Congenial Soul]

Awww that is soo sweet i like it alot

[Delicate Porcelain]

I like it, would be better if it had correct capitals and puncuation, though...
4/5

[clumsy-story of my life]

this is good. im not big on poetry that rhyms (yes spelled wrong but its late) but this ones pretty good. Check out some of mine if u get a chance smile