Love Dies

• Artist: Twisted Mii-chan
• Description: This poem I wrote not to long ago it seems like. I was thumbing threw my folders and decided to put up something I got an award with to see what others thought of it. So please leave comments with fair critism and vote fairly, not just because you wish to bump my poem down so yours seems better.
• Date: 03/04/2009
• Tags: love hurting death broken betrayed

Love hurts...
Love burns...
It screams in pain and tries to breathe!
But is smothered in the struggle.
We killed it with the war!
That we started with jealousy.
You attacked me!
So I attacked you!
With vengeance in my mind,
And passion in my heart!
You’ve tasted my blood,
And I have tasted yours.
So as you leave me,
I give you these words.
Love hurts...
Love burns...
Love dies!

Comments

[twilightschizo]

hey this poem is awesome. i'm going through a hard time right now and it really made sense to me.