DePressed Love

• Artist: justcallmejack
• Description:
• Date: 03/01/2009
• Tags: depressed love

The chill comes on the wind,
Blows back my hair,
hits my boney body,
but i feel no cold.

The sun shines down on the sea,
The surfers smile up at the sky,
girls sunbathe,
boys whisle,
some stare at me "the freak".

Dinner taste, going down,
when it comes up it hurts,
hurts my family,my only friend,
and....me.

The meds don't work,no matter how many i take,
i've been thouht to may shrinks,
done to many trys at kill myself.

I've never touched you,
never kissed you,
never told you how i feel,
and now i wish i had.

Comments

[Llargi]

its good, but i if the title wasnt there id be confused at the end.i would have ended even more emo than you ,like ....* dramatic pause*i never touched ,i never kissed, i never felt,even without you i wish i had.*end scene* sorry the drama queen in me,heh, but this also made me wan to draw,im goping to be putting up a poem about a crazy chick if you want to read and comment i did it in like five minutes for my sisters homework