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VOICES
I sit down with pen in hand
Stare at the blank page till im no longer a man
Till I am God
Till I relize i have the power to create
Till I cud sit and read and apreciate amazing life
Amazing life i wrote
More insperation
So I continue to write
I hear whispers that tell me where
When
How
Fast
Slow
But I still contimplate wheter to listen or not
But they sense indivduality
And tell me stop
Convert to the norm
Come, follow conform
I still write what I feel
Ignoring out side infulence
But they get louder, overbearing, insolent
So I close my eyes and count to 5
Forget everything else except similes, metaphors, rhyme
And then there I find
There I find deep in my mind
One divine silent place to rest
- by PeridotClean |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/09/2009 |
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Skye_Fuller - 06/13/2010
- I love it =) 5/5
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 05/09/2009
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not bad. though if you are a fellow schizophrenic, my advice is to do what I do: let the auditory and visual hallucinations influence your writing as much as possible. 4/5.
P.S. check out my poem "Angels in a Child's Mind" I have a feeling you'd like it - Report As Spam
- Rel Hoe - 02/09/2009
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baby, this is so good.
you are so poetic, insperational, and just plain amazing.
i'm sorry this comment sucks, i can't think right now.
i love you(: - Report As Spam