The Man I Thought I Would Be

• Artist: Sin_Bear03
• Description: I made a lot of mistakes with my ex so i wrote her this poem explaining how i felt. I am an ex poet now but i just wanted to see what people thought of the poems i won awards for.
• Date: 02/08/2009
• Tags: thought would

i thought i would always be there for you
but when you came crying i would leave
i should of stayed there by ur side
and never left when u need me

i thought i would never let you go
but instead i found every reason to leave
instead of finding ways to get you to love me
i gave u every reason to hate me

i thought i would be a great boyfriend
but instead i always hurt you when you were down
i never meant to be this way
some how this is the way i found

now that im the man i promised i would never be
i think of the man i thought i would be
all this mistakes iv made
when i should of made none
im here saying im sorry
even though i know that we are done
im sorry you will never see
the man i thought i would be

Comments

[MzMaryCharlii77]

niice stuff!!! biggrin real deep man real deep!!! haha... luvett!!!

[290DarkStars]

wow dude.. sounds like you gotta lot to write home about.. lucky you.. your probobly cool enough to get a date. Ahh well, pity on me.anyway... liked the poem and hope to find better stuff from you (If its possible for you to do better (compliment)) well anyway.. I gotta advise a little more rhyming.. and if you dont think that its possible.. please check pout my stuff. that is if you can stoop that low mrgreen

[lime green pop]

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