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It's not right when someone dies...
you know, that special someone you love.
Usually it's unexpected...
like the one I encountered.
November 8th.
Phone calls.
Screams.
Cries.
It's like the world was coming to an end.
The one person...
that ONE person.
It was HE that made me laugh,
and take my breath away.
It's not like he's moved away,
or out of contact...
He's gone.
The one person I had a crush on for all of these years.
Dead...
Like a baby without her passifier.
Horrified friends and family members.
Crushed, as if a rock had hit me on the head.
I don't understand death, and i probably never will.
But his has taught me something.
Live for what time you have.
Do everything...
Regret NOTHING.
- by Shimmering Bubbles |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/02/2009 |
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- Title: Death is REAL... [i love you]
- Artist: Shimmering Bubbles
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Description:
this is dedicated to my best friend.
his death has put me through an emotional breakdown.
it's nice to put my thoughts down on paper.
it's not a ryhming poem, but it's by me...
and THAT'S what matters. =] - Date: 02/02/2009
- Tags: death real love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Shimmering Bubbles - 02/09/2009
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thanks for rating and commenting ^^
and thanks panda =] - Report As Spam
- anime_freak_kouga - 02/07/2009
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Normally I don't care for poems that don't rhyme. But I really enjoyed yours. I am terribly sorry about your best friend. And you're right, death usually is unexpected, and one SHOULD live life with no regrets and live it to the absolute fullest.
Five stars for sure! - Report As Spam
- PandaMascot - 02/07/2009
- I'm really sorry.
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- Death_0f_Death - 02/02/2009
- nice and u have a piont. (1 should cherishs life and what they have even 2 their very end)
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