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I never thought anyone could love
With true passion.
I never knew anyone could like another
Enough to truly love.
I never understood love.
Until I met you…
Now I understand love.
I know what love is.
A feeling
A knowledge
A truth
So profound it can not be explained
Only felt
Experienced
Believed.
Never leave me.
I beg on my knees
For to know love and the feeling…
And be without it…
Is a fate…
Worse than death.
Please I beg you
Never
Go…
- by Sid the Body Gaurd |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: NEVER LEAVE ME
- Artist: Sid the Body Gaurd
- Description: theres not mutch to say about this one.
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: never leave
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Comments (6 Comments)
- CyborgAdair - 06/29/2014
- Beautiful poem! One thing you could work on is the word choice in the first stanza, it feels a little repetitive. Also, I think it would have a nice effect if in the second stanza you put semicolons ( wink after feeling and knowledge, but that's just me.
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- Jess369 - 01/26/2010
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I'm favoriting this one - beautiful (:
It makes mine look like crap.. - Report As Spam
- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 07/27/2009
- beautiful..... apsolutly beautiful
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- Marionette_Mentation - 02/28/2009
- It's persuading in a romantic way... ^.^
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/20/2009
- aw thats very sweet very lovely ^^
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- Starlight_Miss - 01/19/2009
- I like it lots! 4/5. Rate back please!
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