Be grateful

• Artist: trissygirl
• Description: this is the one and only poem I have ever written,
  I wrote it when I was 13 years old,
  It's a poem of morals, life and the blessings that every person has
  
  It's not much of a poem, I know, but it sure as hell beats the cr@p
  outta reading a really sappy-a**-feel-bad-for-me poem >.<
• Date: 01/09/2009
• Tags: grateful

Be grateful for what you have,
for if you complain you might not have it anymore.

be grateful for the people around you,
for if you are not thay might not be around you anymore.

Be grateful for your job,
for if you are not you might not have one for much longer.

be grateful for your family,
your home and the people who live around you,
for if you don't they and everything that you once knew to be home,
will be out of your reach.

But mostly, be grateful for life,
because it is the greatest blessing of all.

Be grateful for all you posses for there are people out there dieing,
dieing f poverty, hunger and most of all war,
telling themselves that the hardest thing to do in their situation is to live,
live and be grateful for what they have.

May 21 2006

Comments

[i-cookie-monster8]

its nice i gess
im just use to depressing things

[Xx-_-jarbear-_-xX]

i liked it because it is not about death like most poems(i dont think poems on death take much effort)

[Woof Myoto]

Hmm...i wasnt moved that much to be honest
lets see
Consistency was needed on caps on Be i know it seems dumb but it makes it look nice

when you used the word "Thay"it should be use with a bit more power

As for the big details lyrics were okay
was their a method behind it? Hmm maybe your topic was to general or something im not sure