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All around me are people
People running, walking
People singing, talking
People laughing, dancing
People are around me
People crying, hating
People dying, lying
People killing, rating
The two groups
are both people
But two vastly different types
Two opposite ends of the spectrum
One end happy,
Everything spectacular
Smiles and love
Nothing More
The other end sad
Life at its lowest
Weakest and worst
Nothing Less
Happy at high point
Sad at the lowest
But the shades of grey
in the infinite spectrum of the two
is what makes life true
- by P l u m k e y - |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Happy at high point
- Artist: P l u m k e y -
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I am submitting this in a writing portfolio, for an exclusive arts school. I am looking to go for Literary. Please tell me if this is any good!
Things in red are thing that I am unsure of..
Please Comment! - Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: happy high point
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ABluejay - 03/11/2009
- yep, you might want to make a stanza about the people in between, life isn't a simple shade of gray all the time
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- Gabriel Kitsubi - 01/03/2009
- it is good but i think that you can improve on it a lil
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