Cutterfly

• Artist: _Roooose_
• Description: - . - i SUCK at writing poems. Comment? D;
• Date: 12/24/2008
• Tags: cutterfly

Butterfly, Butterfly, show me your wings
Your freedom of choice, and your voice- oh it sings.
Beautiful, Beautiful, your colors, they shine.
Your beauty it speaks, and yet seeks a flat line.
Poison, sweet poison entering me
Yet your presence in essence it comforts- don't leave.
Butterfly, Butterfly, brushing my skin
What's this? This bliss- your wings sink in.
Cutterfly, Cutterfly, you press so deep
This blood, this love, your beauty is cheap.

Comments

[xXxfatedxXx]

yours dont not suck in the least bit! quite the opposite actually :3 its beautifully written and flawlessly flows. its deep and tragic and has a hint of thought in it.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Sour tasting poem. Can poems have taste? Well, this one is biting. I like it.

[Kibroth]

Certainly, a most beautiful composition, and very close to flawless. 5/5

[CannibalWizards]

YAY.
Prettyful.

[_Roooose_]

Nehh, lack of comments D;

[_Roooose_]

xD thankyou, but its still a sucky attempt at a poem. D;

[atsyrk]

OMG U DONT SUCK this poem is so deep, so filled with emotion. i can understand every line. wow. you should read my stuff. mines not even as good as yours!! 5/5