The Eternal Clouds of Bliss

• Artist: XxRaven KnightxX
• Description: I wrote this poem to a girl i liked and thought was truly amazing, but when we dated, she turned out to be the biggest meany i've ever met...so i gave this poem to my current girlfriend because we share a love of poetry. If you think that this is not my own original piece, then i'll personally hunt you down and kill you because this came straight from my heart!!
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: eternal clouds bliss

My dear love, thou art so sweet,
I’ve killed my inner self so I that I may not sleep,
Thou make me feel so alive,
Thou lay upon me thy wondrous eye,
That I could not wish to belie mine own gaze,
From thy heart-warming face,
Thou art so truly perfect, I must hate,
So that I may be able to defy my fate,
I wish to have a place near thy breast,
So that I may rest,
In these eternal clouds of bliss,
Waiting for when thou shall wake me with a kiss.

Comments

[Cait aka Cat]

i write poem lik that the old school style to me it sounds better

[Macabre_Words]

Wow... That's so amazing, I bet your girlfriend loved it! 5/5.

[kitten blood luster]

i love it. it's sweet and the way of talk is kool

[Jeyrin]

wow....It's interesting. 3/5. cause it could use a bit of editing. Follow this link to the gallery of my mule account so you can rate back? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gallery/?uid=12171869

[XxRaven KnightxX]

mind this is my first time ever showing someone other than the two girls, and this is also my first time in this arena.