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You are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are grey, you never know dear how much i love you, so please dont take my sunshine away.
Im writting another letter again today,
to hope youll reply saying that you are okay.
It hurts to know where we began
and now mommie I know you ran.
I can still see the past through my youthful eyes,
but what i had seen then, could have possibly been lies.
For when you are young all you seem to see,
is happyness, flowers, but no misery.
Im still sitting, waiting, and contimplating what to do,
when i get a new letter and the writing is done by you.
But sadly mommie you proved that that cant be true,
that if your voice ever speaks to me, its not the real you.
I remember when i saw your true green eyes,
that held all truth and told no lies,
You used to call me your little baby girl,
But something interfeared and screwed up that world.
You found an escape from your children you swore you loved,
and messed up your head with your true love, drugs.
And mommie i love you, but you dont know how bad this feels,
to think that all of those years your love wasnt real.
And momie i can hear you, every time you say, "i love you"
But im not so sure if that statement is true.
So ill give you some time to finally get clean,
im almost grown up if you even know what that means.
and ill see you soon mommie when you get out,
of the barred cage you have put yourself in, burried in doubt.
Just remember mommie what i say, in my letter i write today:
You were my sunshine, my only sunshine, you made me happy when skies were grey, youll never know dear how much i love you...why did you take my sunshine away.
- by Your lost angel |
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- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: Letter: you are my sunshine
- Artist: Your lost angel
- Description: This is something i wrote about my mother, and yes i know i didnt write the original You are my sunshine, but its just thrown in there cause its kind of how i feel...my mom kind of screwed me over and now she just got put in jail....and i hope this wakes her up...but who knows*shrugs* she may be messed up forever. Thanks for voting and please leave comments, i enjoy knowing what people think.
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: sunshine
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Comments (2 Comments)
- meizha - 03/29/2009
- Oh. That is sad. I got tears in my eyes. Using the word "Mommie" just made it more emotional because you so expressed how much you love your mother behind all the hurt. I'm so sorry things like these happen to innocent kids. I hope you find happiness despite this tragedy. This is a great emotional poem.It deserves 5 stars.
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- whitejade13 - 12/27/2008
- Wow. That is a powerful poem. It's very very good. NO that's not it. I can't find the right words to descibe it. infinity/5
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