You Left Me

• Artist: Dissolve the Pain
• Description: Just a poem, out of my head. It stinks, but I tried.
  Actually, it's more like song lyrics.
  
  Dedicated to New Moon by Stephenie Meyer.
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: left leaving newmoon

You left me
It's impossible to see
I can't breathe
'Cause your not close to me

You left me
My heart is heavy

My heart
is ripping apart

A hole is tearing me apart
Making me lifeless

Then, I hear your voice
Inside my head
Everyone has confusion
But, it is easily said
That I....am "dead"

People start telling me..
I am lifeless you see

Then, one day..
I fight for your life
I see you again
I'm alive again

Comments

[Nuhaix]

indeed very good

[Dissolve the Pain]

thanks!!

[7-3-21-13x]

This poem is great for one off the top of your head.

[Dissolve the Pain]

thanks smile

[-Kingdom of Nothingness-]

It's good for a poem of the top of your head. Poems tend to be better if you wait for the inspiration to really hit you.