don't tell me

• Artist: the_toxic_shockartist
• Description: it's a poem
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: dont tell

don't tell me you need space
this isn't about confinement
don't tell me you need air
the oxegyn's just fine
and I can't stand to here your pretty little lies
the stupid little sparkle in your stupid little eyes
don't tell me you can't stand it
your posture is just fine
and the sentimentle value
in your smile has declined
don't tell me you tried your best
cuz you could do much better
the throbbing has subsided from deep down in your chest
now your runing out of excusess and your running out of time
I guess I should have told you if you left I'd be just fine

Comments

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

Hmmmm...^ ^ Quite... Well.. I can't think of a word for it, so it''ll just be 'quite'. But I do like it a lot..

[Joelundone]

nice I get all of it, its awesome 5/5

[hey girl hey XD]

cool! i like it alot...i like ur style 5/5

[Skyfeather323]

I really like this. You did a great job, although some of your spelling was wrong. Still.... I like it.

[ninja of the underworld]

excellent