we are

• Artist: arknem
• Description: it is a sad day when all gose rong
• Date: 12/02/2008
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as you cry as you die
you send me love yet you leave me
you killed the pain enuf to love
we love we hate
oh, i dream of one last kiss to take
the tears i can not cry
these wishes will never die
the heart you gave the life's long lie
yet you kiss this darkend soul
and filled me up to make me hole
your gone forever you made me lost inside
not a thing left but the tears i cant cry
why oh, why must you die
and leave me not a thing left but to die
the love we had is the love i hate
and in this we are dead in our graves crying

Comments

[an ornery pear]

I agree with Gekkoukan. There are some spelling issues, but you did a nice job.

[Asebi]

a few spelling mistakes, but a good poem T^T

[Zeelora]

5 stars your way friend
This is an awesome poem, and I'm not lying

[makeko-san]

awww arknem if u want a kiss come to me

[Asebi]

Tis true how life goes on crying and true how there are some spelling mistakes, but a beautiful poem in the sense anyway 5/5

[Myusica]

rob you have a few spellin problems like cody but 5/5