Defeated

• Artist: FormerlyKitaTataki
• Description: I was emo like I normally am when I wrote this. It can imply many things, hundreds of things. But can you find the secret meaning?
  P.S- please comment!
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: defeated depressed

The salt of tears
Burns my face
But hardens my heart
And many times the question comes
But many times the answer is the same
No
No is poison to the heart
On almost any scale
When sorrow and defeat cloud the air
And choke you
Smothering
All
Happiness
What do you do?
When there is no point
Of trying to fight
And it all crashes down
Dead.
Heartless.
The devil of despair
Is really quite good
At crushing hopes and dreams
And you are
Defeated.

Comments

[Dreadful Stranger]

good poem.....am i guessing...mabey, you asked a guy if he loves you and he said no? its usually the reason:

[kittypandakoala123321]

Nice word choice, way better than the poem I wrote last year: The Cute Kittens *shudder* You should enter the river writing contest and win again. What IS the secret meaning? A crush? Is that what it is? Am I seriously this annoying?

[ree-ree_bear]

i cant find the meaning yet but im trying to figure it out pretty difficult but i like the challenge.Powerful poem
ill comment again when i figure it out i promise.
mucho amor,
fruity-fruity3