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As I walk around in the dead of winter, as I remember
I close my eyes and listen to the wind blow me ‘bout
My eyes water from the harsh blows against my face
As I walk alone, I seem to break away from society
My thoughts escape as my breath dries from my lungs
I look around and start to cry of the memories of you
Alone I break; killing the pain that is within me once again
As I look into the past, the nightmares return vividly
I cry to myself: I will make it go away, can’t be here no more…
I continue to walk alone in the shadows of dreams
The stars peak through the swift clouds above; the night grows colder
My hearts accrues to the bleak of darkness; my hearts dies within me
The snow falls down as the sudden death gropes its snare
Choking on memories of value; dying from the world of daily torment
My soul crushed from the winters’ toll; my tears, icicles, fasten to my cheeks
Conjuring the evil of Hell; laughing at myself for decadence’s worth
The twinge just tolerable, but faintly stronger than the vise of death
Instantly my endurance quickly fades into the shadows of Hell
My body starts to depart this life of torment and pain to a place I call home
Day and night, the same story, the story of…Hell
Each day that I walk in the mortal realm, the closer I am to death
Each step heavier than the last; the puzzle of life becoming more incomplete
The image falling apart before mere men of inhumane justices
Crying to be damned from the world of living to the world of Hell
Alone I break; killing the society around me, but time stands frozen
Life will cease as I walk along; death no longer feared, but praised in Hell
I will make it go away, can’t be here no more…
Alone I seem to break…
For this was just a ‘mare, but a tale of veracity, a tale of a life, of Hell
A tale of mysterious life in Hell, which resurrects everyday
A tale of trepidation life; a post-closure of death in this Hell
- by Vincent_Iscariot_Key |
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- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: Alone I Break (With You)
- Artist: Vincent_Iscariot_Key
- Description: This poem may seem like it's targeted at someone in particular, but I assure you, it's not. The person "you" is society itself.
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: alone
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Haiizel Nut - 05/27/2009
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Woooh. Thats really good <//3
I luv it!. 5/5 Really. Check out meh
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- Kikka Chelle - 05/16/2009
- There are no words in this world or any other to explain the beauty of your poem.
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- Vincent_Iscariot_Key - 11/28/2008
- Thank you for your feedback, good friend. *hugs back* The poem is basically a double-stand poem, another words, the first and last stanza work together, while the middle tells the story.
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- ashlan - 11/28/2008
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This is very riveting, especially towards the end. The beginning, the writing starts off shaky, not flowing as well as it does later on in the poem.
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