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she is gone from where she layed her head at night
now it can no longer feel right
it is empty where she layed beside me
I can no longer go on happily
the warmth of where she lay right there
then I could hardly care
I miss her much
my heart aches such
why so soon
int that one afternoon
I guess I never realized she made
me happy, contented and reality fade
forever beside me will be cold
what next could this cruel world behold
I guess this all could have been fate
but it left me all just to hate
forever lonely maybe more
why can't this heal like a sore
you were here now you are gone
I'll always remember that place in the lawn
those last few hours we spent together
perhaps more if it wasn't for the weather
memories of you I will always remember
just don't forget I had to surrender

- Title: memories of you
- Artist: zeiro0
- Description: well i want to hear your oppinions on my poem. this popped into my head one night and it is about my dog. ya i know but hey.
- Date: 11/17/2008
- Tags: memories cruel fate hate
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Comments (1 Comments)
- the_toxic_shockartist - 02/07/2009
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lots of spelling and grammatical errors
2/5 the actuall idea of the poem 5/5 so you get a 3.5/5 - Report As Spam