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How will the town react
if they ever found out the truth,
that the man I was seeing
had internal youth
He keeps his face hidden
in the darkness of his hood.
I wish I can show his beauty to all.
If only I could.
He can appear at any time
dressed in his sleek black cloak
made of the softest silk
I have ever stroke
I slowly run my fingers
through his lush long black hair.
Into his eyes of baby blue
is where I dare to stare.
At first his touch is icy cold
but then his embrace is all so warm
he holds me close cursing,
how soon he'll have to perform.
He has postponed my end
ever since we have met.
He wanted to help me first
not let me die just yet.
I never thought
he could be so sweet
kind enough
to let me cheat
But it cannot last forever
soon he'll have to stop the heart beats
But that's okay, as long as he promises
to lay beside me on the bed-sheets
The town never liked me.
My work always made them upset
but my love thought I was a genius.
This, I will never forget.
He wanted me to finish .
This was the chance he gave,
to finish all my writing
before I took my talents to the grave.
Edgar Allen Poe
must be oh so jealous
that his end was a horrid October 7
while mine was nothing but kindness.
I think it was this town
that caused me this illness
that will soon lead me
to that tunnel of brightness
But that is all right
they are just jealous I guess
that I can spin a web
even while I'm in my nightdress
And I know, they'll never have
the unique chance I'll get before my last breath
to put a smile on my killer
by saying, "I'm in love with Death."

Comments (6 Comments)
- red1496 - 10/30/2008
- this reminded me of twilight!!! very nice nd well constructed.
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- Crimson Crysis - 10/30/2008
- i like it ..its some kinda --special^^
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- Elegansia - 10/30/2008
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wow 3 comments already?
Cool
It is cool as a metapher. Funny how that turned out. - Report As Spam
- iFuzziCandy - 10/30/2008
- nice
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- -PH-Mandirigma- - 10/30/2008
- Nice Poem Ms. Elegansia very nice
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- Damion Nash - 10/30/2008
- Lol, I think I like it best when I imagine it as a metaphor, but it's cool either way. The images are really neat.
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