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This eye is sad..
Because of you.
This eye cries..
Because of you.
Tears are falling,
Their al mine.
Its my eye, and I cry for you.
- by KoekjesMonster |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/06/2008 |
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- Title: The Eye.
- Artist: KoekjesMonster
- Description: my Eye XD
- Date: 10/06/2008
- Tags: eyes crying tears
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Comments (4 Comments)
- FairyDustInTheWind - 10/20/2008
- okay thanx :3
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- kryptic_valiance - 10/07/2008
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did you know that you spelled "all" incorrectly?
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- La Petite Mofette - 10/06/2008
- just to grammar mistakes that bug me, 1. you have a typo on all 2. instead of their it should be they're... besides that it's not bad.
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- SuperModel4life - 10/06/2008
- ( claps ) ( sniffles( that was awesome
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