life and death

• Artist: kaieunown13
• Description: i had to write a free verse poem for skool and this is th result
• Date: 10/02/2008
• Tags: life death

life is like a rose,
beautiful and sweet sometimes
thorny bitter and hard others,
as it grows and grows
but its all the same
and such a shame
when one day it shrivels up
and says its time
time to say good-bye
for i am about to die
or
when its cut off,sharply,at
the end

Comments

[SogniDeAnima]

awsum yo....good job =]

[XCookie_BabyX]

thats really good!

[11potato11]

that's a nice belief on life.
I like your poem, its nice.

[Princess_AlisonBlaze]

that's an intresting way to look at life. I never thought of that. Good job. High rate from me. ^_^

[F u c k l e z]

beautiful i would never of thought of that