what is the truth?

• Artist: xxMITA_MATAxx
• Description: emo poem
• Date: 09/01/2008
• Tags: truth lies honesty faithful

what is the truth?
is it all just something to be kept a secret?
or something that should be told all the times
no lies
but sometimes the truth hurts
some people say "you can't handle the truth!"
some people say it's best be things better left unsaid
and some people want you to be truthful to them all the time
and others don't want to hear another word
the truth can hurt
and then the truth can be good
the truth can keep one from killing themself
the truth can also help one make the right decision
but what can the truth do?
because some people lie like there's no tomorrow
and have the best life ever
and then some people are always honest and faithful
and they're life is so messed up
but i'm so honest
yet i only lie when neccessary
so lying is only good when neccessary?
or is it better when it's just white
the truth is
what is the truth?

Comments

[sporosofyadah]

Try not to start so many lines with the same word. Repetition can be a useful tool sometimes but that's over doing it. Seventh line needs some clarification. It's confusing. This poem was below average. 2/5

[dmaticic]

Great, except for "lie like theres no tomorrow." Try to avoid cliches like that. But otherwise, it is really well thought out!

[Ishkir]

I like it. Very well written. I'm usually an honest person myself. I can't lie, I always get caught.

[xxMITA_MATAxx]

thanx for commenting