a frightning feeling

• Artist: kiraryu1
• Description: A poem which i experienced emotions like never before. I never felt this many at one except when i was writing this. I hope you enjoy it ,it is special to me. its also how i felt around someone i knew i would never get to be with when i was near them.I again hope you all like it.
  
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• Date: 08/02/2008
• Tags: scary

what is this feeling i have?this feeling i've never had. my hands shaking, my legs like

lead.my heart is beating weakly so very weak like it will stop here and leave me dead.

my head filled to the rim with regret,darkness and my past heart aches and crushes my

head filled with dark forboadings. my eyes make me wanna go blind,the burn with tears

of blood and wildfire. I'm calm and crazy all at once. what is wrong with me? I'm filled

with desires i've never known. I'm filled with pains i've never heard or felt before. my

blood freezes in my veins then on fire as my bane. my palms sweat as I'm speaking.

my body is fully numb. what is wrong with me? my skin feels like its crawling.my hairs stand on

end.this is scaring me!

WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME!?

Comments

[justamanda325]

your in love
thats whats wrong smile

[MovedWebsitesBye]

Needs work. A lot of work.
The words you have used were quite predictable, and I think you could improve on how you set out your words, or change the order of the verses.

[Sarah be pervin]

^^ it's truly an amazing work of art. I even picture a person acting out the whole thing!! it's inspiring! biggrin