Pathetic

• Artist: _Scaaary
• Description: I hate you for being you.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: pathetic

You sicken me.

Your ideas have always been accepted,
You are wearing excellence on your sleeve,
You’ve been recognized as the best,

But failure;
Now, failure,

Someone not acknowledging your superiority
Turning a blind eye to your talents
And ignoring your mask of wonder,
Talking to you like a person,

Is something you can’t take.

You’re so used to being the best
That when someone shoots you down,
You crumble.

Pathetic.

Comments

[OsiCat16]

this is good

[popsicle]

Good idea to jump from, but overall it sounds generic. Maybe play with syntax a bit to spice it up and give it more personality and strength.

[Angeladr7]

Very strongly worded poem, but it works to express the hate and disdain for the person who has always been prideful. I can understand the hate.

[Npv987456]

this is pathetic