Speak!

• Artist: AdeIaid
• Description: i wrote this after i got some inspiration from the band Rise Against
  i didnt take anything from the band no lyrics or anything else
  if you dont believe me then well have fun XD
  if you like it then plz rate high and plz leave a comment =D
• Date: 07/28/2009
• Tags: speak

So this is the world we live in?
This is where iv been?
Living with little ease
Poverty and disease
So come child let us pray
To a god that wont answer if we could stay
I cant hear the prayers you say each morning
But I can hear the sound of people mourning
For the loss of sisters and brothers
Uncles, aunts, fathers, and mothers
So stand with me child hand in hand
Today is the day we will make our stand
The bullets and tanks can kill
But at our will
The one thing it cant get is what we have already
Our thoughts and words steadied
They can shoot us but not the difference we’ve made
Our words is what will of stayed
So don’t wait till tomorrow you may be dead by then
You have a speak up the question is not when
But it is to who
Iv made my voice heard my answer is to you
So what is your answer?
--XIII

Comments

[Deadly_Virus99]

Awesome......Just Awesome!!!

[L Iawliet]

*pulls out fake lighter, sways around for a bit then gets bored, leaves to go listen to alexisonfire, then comes back to repeat the process* i guess i'll vote 5

[xBroken_Beyond_Repairx]

I think its really good and deep smile

[Elusive Night Walker]

awesomefully majical ^w^ rate back please

[TheMusicNote]

nice, but i agree with Naatta. also you need to use proper grammar (I've, not iv) but other than that, it's excellent ^ ^. really sad,but pretty, and that's hard to do without sound self pitying... and even though im not one for poems including god, i really liked this one. 5/5!

[Evil_Leia]

It's very good ^^

touching actually ;D

makes you think..... O:

[Naatta]

Needs better flow. The rhyming is fine but the general flow is a little wompy-jawed...