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Rain
falls like
Sleet
cold and hard
at first.
Gray and clear
like falling icycles
from the last
winter's fall
Pale
Blue
Alone
tears
you left me
Alone
Rain, now so cold and so warm
i see you
but i chose not
to look you in the eye
and smile
because my tears
cloud my eyes
with a merky slush.
i'm not pleading
not retreating
my feelings
so goodbye
forever into
the darkness
i lie
and wait...
for you
emo
- by darksangel34 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: rain
- Artist: darksangel34
- Description: i wrote dis when i was really REALLY lovesick...and heartbroken...so please give fairly goood ratings!!!!!
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: rain
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Comments (7 Comments)
- sharren cutie - 01/31/2009
- nice 5/5
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- Unworthy Misfit - 01/02/2009
- Thanks for rating mine, iTruly love your poem. I'll give you a 5. [; Rate all of my poems please. <3
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- Xxkaitlyn923xX - 01/01/2009
- really good. thanks for your comment&vote on my poem.
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- EcoGirl4Ever - 12/28/2008
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Thats beautiful! I'm very stunned at how well you expressed your feelings! I know what its like to be lovesick and heartbroken. It sucks big time, and can make a person wanna do stupid things.
5/5 and a 100 (if this were an assignment, and if I were a teacher! lol) :] - Report As Spam
- Demons_Paradise - 12/27/2008
- 5/5 rate mine please razz
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- TheresaGoeSRawR - 12/22/2008
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oh my gosh....
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i really lved it ;D
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Dreamers.Disease. - 12/21/2008
- beautiful.
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