Picture of Life

• Artist: Kaira Angel
• Description: All of your choices matter. 'Fate' or 'Deastiny' doesn't affect life, your choices and actions do. if you don't get it, when your born, you are like a blank piece of paper, but when you get older you write on it, or make choices and that affect who you are. Then you go to school, your color, but in the poem he/she made the wrong choice and she is like a poison and is emo and depressed, that bird in a cage. Later, when he/she is old they wish they were a better person in life.
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: picture

-Frozen in time
Frozen in place
looking into
an empty space

-A blank world
nothing there
a black pen
but i dont care

-draw a world
draw a life
draw a heart
draw a knife

-add some color
here and there
maybe I should
but I don't care

-draw a cage
draw a bird
screaming, yelling
but isn't heard

-here i am
never was pure
like a poison
with no cure

-seeps into life
my own pain
covering my good
like black rain

-my life is my prison
trapped in here
with no way out
but a cage of drear

-perhaps some day
in a while
I'll buy a mirror
and practice my smile

-tears stream down my face
look at me
I'm a disgrace
Cover my face so no one can see

-I'm still forever frozen
looking at this
MY picture of life
without any bliss

Comments

[yuni wulf -- Alpha Angel]

I like it, its sad to think that some people live life that way, having to feel that way. Ive met a few people kinda like that and I guess somehow I was just in time to save them, but I cant save everyone.

I had to see what was writen here as soon as I saw your username, its Vary similar to one of my characters whose name is Ki-ceara and she happens to be an angel.

I give it a 5. I added a poem here myself, my first one in the arena actually. Its called LIFE (Love Is For Everyone), you can

[Kaira Angel]

well, im glad u like it! heart 4laugh

[lonelyfangirl]

its meaning speaks so clearly to me
im like that person making bad chioces making me feel bad yet i dont change it

[Kaira Angel]

ok ill give u a 5 2!!! ^^

[Diana_is_so_Emo]

wanna check out my poems i got three and an avatar !!!

[Diana_is_so_Emo]

well i guess that makes it better, well its nice smile

[Kaira Angel]

i didnt i did it during math class