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Polemical View
Its just a polemical view
Feel him folding into himself
A division of splitting of cards
Used to living within ourselves
What the point of a question?
When you only receive
Half-baked apocalyptic answers
Given a choice, it grows like cancer
Its just a polemical view
I don't know how to reach you.
Painful music of so many dreams
Begins to play, carries a sting
Supporting creative Offspring
Struggling with force to see
Things that struck a chill in me
Disappearing of light
Element of darkness
Grave weakness
Running through me
I wished I could see
as others see.
As currents get connected
Matters at which to be arranged
More I search
More questions I have.
Headaches to paranoia
Acting on my liver by virtue of this
Lives in seclusion in this vicinity
The science of fortifying
Others recall a dimensional identity
Words to describe this personal
Yet common perception.
What the point of the question?
When you only receive
Half-baked apocalyptic answers
Given a choice it grows like cancer.
Its just a polemical view
I don't know how to reach you.
By the passage of breath
Biting my bottom lip
An important subtext of a statement
You have really enhanced my life
Thus the cliche
Upon acts, upon acts of creation
A simple life saving medication.
- by MyMaiMy411 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/15/2008 |
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- Title: Polemical View
- Artist: MyMaiMy411
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Description:
Polemical means a controversial argument, as one against some opinion,
a person who argues in opposition to another; controversialist. .
A little insight on this piece, is that it was a college assignment a few years ago. I had to open the dictionary and pick out a word to write about. I only had 40 minutes to do it. - Date: 10/15/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- BogiePop - 10/15/2008
- Quite interesting, seems abet busy but that’s not necessarily a bad thing.
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- Sweetpea The Tigress - 10/15/2008
- I read that through a couple of times- It's deep and impassioned; and I found it somewhat painful even though it's excellent... It's a truth...
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- Mad_Scientists_PetMonkey - 10/15/2008
- u do poetry?
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- ArsenicAshley - 10/15/2008
- very passionate
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- Sir_Snuggly - 10/15/2008
- I am going to have to read this a few times to really get a good view on it. But my initial reactin is you have done an amazing job. It challenges the reader to think. I like it.
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- notmuchdutch - 10/15/2008
- Thats pretty deep .. rings of truth .
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- Mz-Chicka1 - 10/15/2008
- great job bravo
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