Red tears

• Artist: Momichi17
• Description: im new here so i kno as much as a new born......o and plz dont take mi poems i work really hard on them and their really important to me
  and the picture i used belongs to a very artistic person
• Date: 09/25/2008
• Tags: unknown

Red tears

Dripping wet down her face
red and thick she looks to grace
thinking, hoping for a sign
that tells her its almost time
Dripping wet from her eyes
they say red tears r all just lies
begging, pleading she can not see
its almost time shes almost free
Dripping wet into her ear
they're almost gone all her fears
screaming, choking from her pain
they look at her like shes insane
Dripping wet onto the ground
she can not hear..not a single sound
as her life slips away
they all just look..then they say
"red tears...thats all a lie"
"but bloody tears....." then she died

Comments

[x-Ginko-x]

this is amazing! *cries*

[LoveIsBlue16]

DX So sad to read but I think it was very good.
Try to write happy ones as well so I wont have to be sad.
But! I give u 8 thumbes up for this poem. x3

[XBrokenCandyX]

that was very cool......it kinda hurt to read it

[VampirePrincessVermillion]

that was awesome