Falling

• Artist: SlytherinPrincess01
• Description: A poem I wrote while trying to decide if I should tell this guy I liked him. It was written quickly, but it's my favorite.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love falling

Why do I feel like I’m falling
When I am standing still?
Why am I scared to talk to him
When there is so much to say?
Why do I run away
When all I want is to be near him?
Why do the tears come as I think of him
When he’s the one who makes me smile?
Why do I feel this could never be
When I swear that anything is possible?
Why am I afraid of taking the next step
When that step could bring him to me?

Maybe I feel like I’m falling
Because he has turned my world upside down.
Maybe I ‘m scared to talk to him
Because I can’t face the truth.
Maybe I run away
To see if he will follow.
Maybe I cry
Because I’m afraid of losing him.
Maybe I feel this could never be
Because I’m scared of it happening.
And maybe I’m afraid of taking the next step
Because then I might fall.

Comments

[SUPERsangyXD]

Really awesome poem. =]

[On Frail Wings Of Vanity]

The first stanza, there is too many whys and whens. There actually is a limit to how many times you can use a word. You went a little over it. Then in the second stanza, there is too many maybes and becauses'.

[snowyjoe]

tell him
if you didn't already
because there is a chance that he will love you too
i know because it happened to me.